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the cult of Denis

Post by thatguyinTermarmor » Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:42 pm

the idea of this faction is to very zealous cult that spread the words of Denis. the idea of Denis was the perfection of mind, body, and soul. perfection of body is to give your body to experiment to make you best suited for the cult. the perfection mind is to learn the doctrine of Desis. the perfection of soul is to have great zeal.

this is a very eliteys solo to buff your normal troops. they ability like feel no pain, honorer of the chapter (chaplain), etc. called zeal.

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Re: the cult of Denis

Post by BewareOfTom » Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:44 pm

i dunno.... the d in denis could be changed to another letter that would get you ridiculed alot.....
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Re: the cult of Denis

Post by thatguyinTermarmor » Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:46 pm

thank u for the criticism

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Re: the cult of Denis

Post by BewareOfTom » Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:48 pm

yeah, instead of denis pick some sort of old roman or greek name, those always sound better for space marines (I assume space marines cause of the chaplain comment)
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Re: the cult of Denis

Post by thatguyinTermarmor » Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:52 pm

the name is a reference to the children crusades and the chaplain thing is for reference

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Re: the cult of Denis

Post by BewareOfTom » Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:54 pm

lol just saw this in new posts, didnt read where it was going XD

disregard all that I said :P
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Re: the cult of Denis

Post by thatguyinTermarmor » Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:55 pm

so how like the idea

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Re: the cult of Denis

Post by BewareOfTom » Wed Feb 29, 2012 9:03 pm

I kinda like it, but sounds better for a unit or 2 within another army to me, like maybe some sort of warrior-monk-mercs
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Re: the cult of Denis

Post by thatguyinTermarmor » Wed Feb 29, 2012 9:06 pm

so what ability should they give to other units with zeal
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