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by Ravenss
Wed May 30, 2012 9:38 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: The Montreal Wilderness: A History
Replies: 6
Views: 2287

Re: The Montreal Wilderness: A History

Again, a great story by you :D
Ive no criticizem for you this time, only congratulations to another intricate and easy to read story :D!!!
Love it.
by Ravenss
Wed May 30, 2012 9:31 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: The Animals
Replies: 8
Views: 2319

Re: The Animals

Love it, though I would have steered away from the Jurrasic Park kinda thing (animals escaping and eating people) And gone with a 'they were freindly at first, but when we attempted to remove them from the ship to the planet, they went insane and ran off' kinda thing :D Just the way I wouldve done i...
by Ravenss
Sun May 27, 2012 5:29 pm
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Bit of a story.
Replies: 0
Views: 1750

Bit of a story.

The X'lanthos commander stared down the empty street. A tree growing out form a subway stood stock still, against the wind. A window on the 2nd floor of a building thurst open, over looking the road. The way the vegitation in one residence moved. Ambush. 'Humans, ambush, defensive positions!' the c...