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by Roy-Batty
Thu Nov 28, 2013 10:01 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Murkpath: Introduction
Replies: 1
Views: 7569

Re: Murkpath: Introduction

A short, first page introduction of a bigger story I am working on. Just to make sure the new readers know about the DP World...
by Roy-Batty
Thu Nov 28, 2013 10:00 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Murkpath: Introduction
Replies: 1
Views: 7569

Murkpath: Introduction

In the aftermath of mankind’s darkest hour, light is eternal. The remains of the X´Lanthos fleet linger burning above earth’s atmosphere, surrounding the planet in a menacing, netlike grid. The dead craft defy gravity, engulfed in unnatural combustion. Burning Biomass vessels from another world, a w...
by Roy-Batty
Wed Nov 06, 2013 2:50 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Murkpath: Prologue
Replies: 1
Views: 6430

Re: Murkpath: Prologue

Working on a longer story in the Dark Potential universe. I would like to see some feedback for further development. This is the Prologue to get a sense of the flavour, although it doesn´t really say anything about the story itself.
by Roy-Batty
Wed Nov 06, 2013 2:46 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Murkpath: Prologue
Replies: 1
Views: 6430

Murkpath: Prologue

We have marched for weeks, through the unending Murklands and the thick Urban Jungles of the Southern Districts. One long day slowly blends into the next while the slow, determined rhythm of leather boots on dirt and ash dulls our senses. The mind wanders beyond the borders of sanity amidst the mono...
by Roy-Batty
Tue Jul 23, 2013 3:27 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: The Fallen Soldier Chronicles Part 5: Monotony
Replies: 3
Views: 2538

Re: The Fallen Soldier Chronicles Part 5: Monotony

Hey! Good to see you still writing! Reading this piece made me go back and revise the story so far, and I like it. Maybe it would be a good idea to make things a bit more eventful though. I really like how the characters are developing but I am missing the "next step" from last piece. I don´t know i...
by Roy-Batty
Mon Nov 19, 2012 7:53 am
Forum: Dark Potential the Wargame
Topic: History of the Petrov-Morales Corporation - want your input
Replies: 30
Views: 6468

Re: History of the Petrov-Morales Corporation - want your in

Interesting. Going through the notes, first things that comes to mind is critique. Please bare in mind they are born out or love for the project! Pre-War - It seems like Morales and Petrov don’t really have a common ground to do business. Why would Petrov be interested in Weapons Manufacturing? - Th...
by Roy-Batty
Thu Nov 08, 2012 9:48 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvagers History: Chapter 2 - Flaws in the system
Replies: 4
Views: 2384

Re: Salvagers History: Chapter 2 - Flaws in the system

Chapter 2 of Salvagers History. Again, names are provisional! @AirborneHam: Yeah, it is pretty calm around here. But I see some views are still there. Anyway, I can't just stop writing because no one reads it. It wouold be cool to be able to develop these things more with the community, like we coul...
by Roy-Batty
Thu Nov 08, 2012 9:44 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvagers History: Chapter 2 - Flaws in the system
Replies: 4
Views: 2384

Salvagers History: Chapter 2 - Flaws in the system

The triumph of the Alpha Plant model had become apparent and was attracting attention form all over the world. The pilot program still running smoothly in Port Alegre had been copied with similar success in the heart of New York State, next to the new outer ring of the Sydney Conglomerate and right ...
by Roy-Batty
Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:22 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvager History: Chapther 1 - Origins
Replies: 2
Views: 2122

Re: Salvager History: Chapther 1 - Origins

First chapter. All the Alpha, Beta and Bertha names need to be replaced by normal names. Thinking of a good name can take hours and hours of writing time.

Now, i'll sit here in my rocking chair playing my guitar while I watch the tumbleweeds here in the fanfic forum...
by Roy-Batty
Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:19 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvager History: Chapther 1 - Origins
Replies: 2
Views: 2122

Salvager History: Chapther 1 - Origins

At the beginning of the 24th century, the advance of mankind was leaping beyond the stars. As a curious child taking its first steps around the room, man had taken off to discover and exploit other worlds, turning the earth into a planet known throughout many galaxies as Terra. The origin of man. A ...
by Roy-Batty
Wed Oct 31, 2012 9:16 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Intro to a Salvagers History
Replies: 3
Views: 3236

Re: Intro to a Salvagers introduction

Right. Haven't been on here for a long time, for many reasons. Roaming through old docs, I ran across an old file one one of the races I think need a lot more developing. A little intro for starters...
by Roy-Batty
Wed Oct 31, 2012 9:14 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Intro to a Salvagers History
Replies: 3
Views: 3236

Intro to a Salvagers History

The Great War, as those that remain still call it, came to an end without the relief of liberation or the defeat of an evil empire. Rotting Hulks scattered throughout the landscape began to spread their Murk, leaving both man and alien invaders entangled in a desperate struggle to survive. Battle an...
by Roy-Batty
Wed Aug 22, 2012 4:16 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: The Past: Part 1
Replies: 5
Views: 2196

Re: The Past: Part 1

Hey AirborneHam! Good to see you back in the depths of the Fanfic desert. And great to see more of your work. I like it. That's the first that comes to mind. The characters are appealing and I want to see what else you are going to do with Sven and Anata. You have a very visual style of writing that...
by Roy-Batty
Sun May 06, 2012 9:34 am
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: 21. The Eris Scrolls: The 100 year war - Breaking the whole
Replies: 3
Views: 2189

Re: 21. The Eris Scrolls: The 100 year war - Breaking the whole

DOH! Sometimes it's a bit too obvious that English is not my native tongue. Oh well. It's nice to see someone following the scrolls though!
by Roy-Batty
Thu Apr 19, 2012 5:00 pm
Forum: Dark Potential Fan Fiction
Topic: Contest: Adir's Hunt
Replies: 9
Views: 893

Re: Contest: Adir's Hunt

@Airborneham, Well, here's the list of the weapons :-)

I'm getting into the Dark Potential world more and more and it really has a lot of room for developing stories. I think the weakness of the story are the weapons themselves. I have seen far more inspired weaponry (Like yours) around here.